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::CO:: PoeticDragon by yiptrip ::CO:: PoeticDragon by yiptrip
Com for :iconpoeticdragon: !!

was supposed to be flat colored but oops my hand slipped

art © me

Speedpaint: youtu.be/Y4Nob9Y_uDI
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10animallover10 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Awesome OC :)
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Huskypawz Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I will forever love this picture UuU Very peaceful 

Btw, what was the song you used for the speedpaint? It was very pretty~ 
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SteelFangs Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow. The comments on this are ridiculous.
Leg anatomically incorrect? Tell me again how you are an expert on Akita Dragons. For all you know they have dislocated or rotating joints.

If the commissioner is happy and the artist isn't requesting critique then it doesn't matter.
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CHERUBlM Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like how you do the broke leg
broked leg

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sillydawq Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gIGGLEs
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Nafsi-chan Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh, so beauiful!
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xxchaos-howlxx Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Professional Artist
i think you should focus more on composition/cropping rather than filters and brushes... would have looked way better if you hand painted the leaves too. the top where the brush abuse is looks kind of careless. someone paid money for this remember
 rocks don't look look all smooth and even like that. looks like its floating on the water rather than coming up out of it. that's probably just the highlighting job though
the orange mountains in the background are lovely, looks like a sun is setting behind them, so why is there light coming from the viewer's perspective?
also the waterline looks flat and unnatural try adding a bit of curve to it and have the treeline bend around it like it does in nature. would add a lot to the atmosphere

what gets me the most is the cropping, i feel the character and her rock should be zoomed out a little so you can see the entire rock and a bit more of the branches, which seem to be coming from a really short tree when you compare it to the rock. nothing wrong with that it's just what you cant see that makes the picture look weird
i'd give it a 3/5 .. i honestly wonder what you would have done with this if you had more time and put more thought into it, (e.g.; is this where the lighting should come from? maybe i should add more shade because its sunsetting, maybe the branches should come from here etc)


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harbingerz Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah not a good idea.

i mean, posting a well-thought out, practical, good-intentioned critique isn't a good idea. not with "cyanbirddog" or whatever her name even is now. 

you'll quickly discover that neither hinauchi nor her "fanbase" (also known as; asslickers, stalkers, and white-knighting fucktards) can take critique. at all.

they're all too defensive and childish and self-righteous to actually listen to people who offer help. and, they're hopeless cases anyways, darling. hina coochi and her fucktard fanbase won't budge an inch because their overlord is always right. try giving some of these (granted- wonderful and completely understandable) critiques to somebody who isn't an arrogant, above-the-law dumbass with a cult following of 12-year-old wolfaboos. : )))
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misaethewolf Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry but, everyone makes mistakes in their drawings. Even me, even you, and the rest of the artists in  this world. She did her best and it must've taken a long time to complete this drawing (not counting breaks)

And besides, this was only supposed to be a flat color. Her "hand slipped" and put so much more effort into than she should have.

It's nice to get a critique and all, but you're picking out ever single and saying "oh this is wrong, that's wrong. Errythang is wrong."
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calimurr Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude, it's a critique. Not hate-mail.
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